Friday 22 February 2019

Where am I?

WALT: Describe a special place

We were doing descriptive writing. I  did it by thinking of good describing words.

I enjoyed writing about one of my favourite places to go to. It was challenging finding good adjectives







To be BTB I could have some more ideas.
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  1. Sarah Walklin5 March 2019 at 06:31

    Dad said, “Nelson Creek?!” :)

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  2. Anonymous1 April 2019 at 14:01

    Hi Max it's Mark. The first parts I read of your "Where am I?" was really cool because of the way you have done it. Later on down the middle it gets a bit hard to read. Other from that good job I really enjoyed it! :)

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