Walt: write an explanation
I enjoyed writing an explanation.
It was challenging writing the sandpit bit.
Goal: I am learning to use Apostrophes for contractions correctly
Why Paroa School is the best
I want to explain why paroa school is the best school in the galaxy.
My main Reason because there are lots of things to do at playtime. Like the library, the sandpit and the swimming pool. The library is quiet and calm. There a lot of books in there. There are 2 couches and they have a lot of Room.
The sandpit has a lot of sand. The sandpit has a cover so it won’t get wet.
The swimming pool is well looked after. I have a lot of fun in there. You can get keys over the Christmas holidays.
Another reason is we have our own song. Mr Mcarthur wrote the first version then we changed it. Every assembly we sing it. I think we’re the only school that has our own song.
Also our school is next to the beach. We get to go do cool stuff like last term we did a beach clean up.
This year we got to see a whale. Last year we saw a dead shark. Doc and us went down to the beach.
