Tuesday 6 September 2016

Moment in Time - Shaggy




WALT:  describe a moment in time

I enjoyed doing this because you could write about any person.

It was challenging when you had no idea how to do add more stuff.



To make my work BTB, I need to do more sentences.



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3 comments:

  1. Sarah Walklin6 September 2016 at 15:57

    Great story, Max! I felt like I was right there with you! Freaky!

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  2. Sarah Walklin6 September 2016 at 19:20

    Great writing Max. Shaggy sounds really scared. From Dad

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  3. Abbie8 September 2016 at 11:33

    Hi Max,I like how you used some expression in your writing.
    Next step:Speak up a little bit.
    Thanks :)

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