Wednesday 30 November 2016

The three little pigs

Once upon a time there were  3 little pigs and lived with their mum. One day the mum said “you are too old to live with me”. So the pigs set off. The littlest pig  said “I’ll make my house out of marshmallows”. Then he was going to the big waterhole to go swimming. So with a clang, bash and boom his house was done and he went to go down to the big waterhole.  The 2nd oldest pig said “ I’ll make my house out of dog bones.Then he was also going to the big waterhole. So with a clang, bash and boom his house was done and he went to go down to the big waterhole. The oldest pig was going to make his house out of bricks. His house took the longest but it was worth it.  When all the pigs were  inside the big bad wolf came out. He went to the littlest pigs house first he puffed and he huffed and blowed the house down. So he caught the pig and put him in the sack.Then he went to the 2nd oldest pigs house he puffed and he huffed and blew the house down and caught the pig and put him in the sack.He went to the oldest pigs house and puffed and huffed and didn't couldn't blow the house down. So he went through the door. So he caught the oldest pig and put him in the sack. But luckily the oldest pig had a pocket knife. So he cut the sack open. The pigs all came out. They followed him to his house and when he went in the pigs all locked him in and left him in there and they all lived in the brick house. The end

2 comments:

  1. You've rewritten this story in a really interesting way Max!

    I like the clang, bash, boom bit!
    Mum

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