Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, NZ.
Great story, Max! I felt like I was right there with you! Freaky!
Great writing Max. Shaggy sounds really scared. From Dad
Hi Max,I like how you used some expression in your writing.Next step:Speak up a little bit.Thanks :)
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Great story, Max! I felt like I was right there with you! Freaky!
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Max. Shaggy sounds really scared. From Dad
ReplyDeleteHi Max,I like how you used some expression in your writing.
ReplyDeleteNext step:Speak up a little bit.
Thanks :)