WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.
My Olympic experience
I heard people yelling and cheering for me as I was sprinting down the track.
I heard breathing from the other runners as they were sprinting up behind me.
I saw flags waving in the wind I was so proud because I saw my flag.
I saw the runners running as fast as they can like their life depends on it.
I saw people everywhere in the stadium they were jumping everywhere.
I felt great and proud because I was winning.
I wondered if my family was watching in Jamaica.
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ReplyDeleteHi max,I loved the way you used a amazing feelings and similes.One question why did you choose this person and maybe next time could you tell the persons name your talking about
ReplyDeleteI really like this story, Max. You've added heaps of detail and the picture makes me crack up!
ReplyDelete:) Mum